Showing posts with label words.not the same. Show all posts
Showing posts with label words.not the same. Show all posts

Thursday, September 13, 2007

An abundance of commas

Today's words that are not the same:

depends
deepens


Today's punctuation marks that are not the same:

,
.


Today's words that are not words:

magicans
muscial


Spellcheck is not by any means a replacement for editing (as the first entry in this post makes clear), but there's a lot to be said for using it to at least give things a once-over and draw your eye to typos. And seriously, what is it with the commas? There are many punctuation marks that can be used to conclude sentences, but commas are not on the list.

Tuesday, August 14, 2007

Just like a man

Today's phrases that are not the same:

her man fans
her many fans


Boy, am I glad I caught that one before it went off for copyediting. I'd never have lived it down.

Thursday, August 2, 2007

Blink and you'll miss it

Today's words that are apparently the same:

empathic
empathetic


I think "empathetic" sounds far too much like "pathetic", and "empathic" is nicely similar to "telepathic", but the author of the book in question uses "empathetic", so into the review it goes.

Today's words that are not the same:

main
many


That one was my fault: not so much a typo as a disconnect between my conscious mind, which was very definitely thinking "many", and the part of my brain that controls my typing, which relied a bit too heavily on the autocomplete for MA__. Oops. I think I need to get more sleep.

sometimes
sometime


"Sometime" is a nice way of pushing "occasional" into the realm of "historical". I'm very fond of it. I admire the reviewer for using it, even if I did have to remove the erroneous s; it's one of those words that looks confusingly like a typo unless you're already familiar with it, so the mistake is understandable.

Today's pet peeve:

"Meticulously crafting a stark and terrifying setting, the story takes several unexpected turns..."

The story did not craft the setting. The author did. This is a dangling modifier, and I see them all the time, most commonly lauding or blaming a book for doing something that was actually done either by the author or by one of the characters. It's tricky to avoid unless you're looking for it, because we so often refer to books, stories, and plots as active entities; "the story takes several unexpected turns" is, on its own, an entirely blameless phrase, and much less awkward than "the author puts several unexpected turns into the story". (I might even let some of the borderline cases pass, like "Rarely mentioning popular series protagonist Getta Rhume, this prequel instead focuses on the adventures of her older brother, Maik." Technically, a book can't mention or focus on anything, but the meaning is clear enough.) I just keep an eye out for initial adverbial phrases with transitive verbs like "craft" and "write" and "create" that point to the author, not the story, as the one taking action.